im sorry i made you look at me
im sorry i burned your eyes
im sorry i made you feel this way
im sorry i made you cry
im sorry i made you think
that you were always wrong
im sorry i had to do this
but now it wont be long
im sorry for all the things i do
and all the things ive said
i wish i could stop hurting you
i wish that i was dead
im sorry i am pretty
im sorry i was born
im sorry i cant let you go
im sorry im so torn
im sorry for so many things
a lot more than this few
but the main thing i am sorry for
im sorry for loving you
















Comments
the last verse was really good in that last line being put there, it sort of acts as the climax- since no action happens within the poem. i like the 'i wish' bits in there since they are not gloomy words themselves but the rest of the phrase make them miserable.
evn
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