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im sorry i made you look at me
im sorry i burned your eyes
im sorry i made you feel this way
im sorry i made you cry

im sorry i made you think
that you were always wrong
im sorry i had to do this
but now it wont be long

im sorry for all the things i do
and all the things ive said
i wish i could stop hurting you
i wish that i was dead

im sorry i am pretty
im sorry i was born
im sorry i cant let you go
im sorry im so torn

im sorry for so many things
a lot more than this few
but the main thing i am sorry for
im sorry for loving you
©2003-2009 ~fukenrights
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:( (Sad) what a sad poem.. hope you do not feel that way anymore.

the last verse was really good in that last line being put there, it sort of acts as the climax- since no action happens within the poem. i like the 'i wish' bits in there since they are not gloomy words themselves but the rest of the phrase make them miserable.

evn
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Can't count the times I've had to apologize for things... things that ought not be apologized for. In any normal case. But I guess love is so doomed sometimes. That the worst thing you can do for a person is love them... give them you... your heart and soul. Jesus I hate it all.

--
Crazy people are an endangered species. Which is a good thing, but not for the crazy people. -Kumo

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